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发表于 2010-6-12 12:03:00
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04年A卷学位试题
1.你认为你的家乡最需要改变的事情是什么？
2.举例说明为什么需要改变？
3.你认为应该怎样去做？
An important thing to change my hometown
My hometown is a large city with a dense population,so it is not avoid to the environment be polluted.
I thinke that environment is an important thing to change my hometown.The reasons can be listed as follws. Firstly, my hometown is crowded with people and their vehicles, the environment is not as clean as I would like it to be, too many cars and buses pollute the air and people also create a lot of garbage that is not always disposed of properly.Secondly, a person’s living environment can greatly affect both his physical and mental health, bad air quality can contribute to many health problems such as asthma, and improperly discarded garbage can spread bacteria that are dangerous to health. Thirdly, the environment can greatly affect the way a person feels. For example, when in clean, attractive surroundings we always feel more optimistic.
Therefore,how to improve quality of the environment is worth paying attention to. On the one hand, we have to not only enact laws to limit pollution, but also take personal responsibility for our own actions.On the other hand, we must first inform people of the dangers of a poor environment. In conclusion, the people of my hometown should work together to make it a cleanr place to live.
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